Okaaay. I have to say, This comic is definitely
newbie material.
1- The text boxes are too. Frikkin'. Huge.
You have a 60 x 40 pixel text box with two words in it.
2- It needs.. emotion. That is a simple thing to do. Just use the "color sap" tool and cover the eyes and mouth. Then, take a black pencil tool and make them smile, or frown, or SOMETHING. Normal people aren't emotionless when they laugh, even if its just a chuckle.
Other than that, I found it smart. I know I'd cry if purple crap got on me and made me ugly.
This comic is 2-3 material, and I give a 3,
'cuz hey, I was just like this at one point.
Good job, for a newbie.
T3h PK at 6:06PM, July 5, 2007
Okaaay. I have to say, This comic is definitely newbie material. 1- The text boxes are too. Frikkin'. Huge. You have a 60 x 40 pixel text box with two words in it. 2- It needs.. emotion. That is a simple thing to do. Just use the "color sap" tool and cover the eyes and mouth. Then, take a black pencil tool and make them smile, or frown, or SOMETHING. Normal people aren't emotionless when they laugh, even if its just a chuckle. Other than that, I found it smart. I know I'd cry if purple crap got on me and made me ugly. This comic is 2-3 material, and I give a 3, 'cuz hey, I was just like this at one point. Good job, for a newbie.