Comment: Is the romance between Axel and Larxene, or Larxene and the Black Fungus?
Reason for rating: There is a lot of extra space in the textboxes, try working on that. I overlooked that they have no outline, but try to include that too. Plus...I don't know if you MEANT to make that recolor incomplete, but if you didn't, it looks horrible (Axel). Plus, I don't get what just happened..did Axel teleport away and a Black Fungus came up to Larxene? Or did Axel transform into a Black Fungus and attack Larxene? I'm just very confused.
DragoonX at 7:09PM, July 5, 2007
Comment: Is the romance between Axel and Larxene, or Larxene and the Black Fungus? Reason for rating: There is a lot of extra space in the textboxes, try working on that. I overlooked that they have no outline, but try to include that too. Plus...I don't know if you MEANT to make that recolor incomplete, but if you didn't, it looks horrible (Axel). Plus, I don't get what just happened..did Axel teleport away and a Black Fungus came up to Larxene? Or did Axel transform into a Black Fungus and attack Larxene? I'm just very confused.