You still need work. Get a better image program (There are a load of free ones out there, try getting Serif PhotoPlus, it's what I use). Work on those speech bubbles. Remember, you need an outline, and for the text to be centred, at the very least.
Also, make an effort on your spelling and grammar. It's surely not that hard to get it right - it'd take what, a few extra seconds? It never looks good if it looks like your comic has been rushed.
Good work. Not quite 5-worthy, but keep going at it.
Dragonium at 1:47PM, July 9, 2007
You still need work. Get a better image program (There are a load of free ones out there, try getting Serif PhotoPlus, it's what I use). Work on those speech bubbles. Remember, you need an outline, and for the text to be centred, at the very least. Also, make an effort on your spelling and grammar. It's surely not that hard to get it right - it'd take what, a few extra seconds? It never looks good if it looks like your comic has been rushed. Good work. Not quite 5-worthy, but keep going at it.
CabbageisEVIL at 10:06AM, July 9, 2007
That's pretty funny.your textboxes have improved. Very good!