Not bad at all. Just a quick suggestion, in the first panel shouldn't it say "I'll give you some advice" instead of "an advice"? Sorry, I had a grammar and spelling obsessed teacher in my last year of school who drilled this into the entire class, and I had him for 2.
sango326 at 3:25PM, Feb. 23, 2008
nice work!
Croi Dhubh at 6:54PM, Dec. 11, 2007
Chicks love jerks...that's a lie *L*
antlan87 at 5:50PM, Dec. 9, 2007
Not bad at all. Just a quick suggestion, in the first panel shouldn't it say "I'll give you some advice" instead of "an advice"? Sorry, I had a grammar and spelling obsessed teacher in my last year of school who drilled this into the entire class, and I had him for 2.
anonymous at 12:55PM, Dec. 9, 2007
good hes going to b nice!
anonymous at 12:45PM, Dec. 9, 2007
yay its working ^___^