Knights in Shining Armor 03
Hero on Dec. 10, 2009
Ya know, as much as Black Knight seems like a Batman/Mr.Terrific character with Ironman's suit and Superman's hair, the original concept of him was simply John Walsh as a superhero. I mean, seriously, the real guy is pretty awesome and has effectively helped combat real crime successfully. He's like Batman having a more realistic response to criminal action. But yeah. Jim Johnson has a television show in which he ask the common man to help catch supervillains.
Orin J Master at 12:54PM, Dec. 11, 2009
you could use some more forethought on the positioning of the characters. the storyline so far seems like you're in far too much of a hurry to move it along rather than tell an actual story, which is actually common with webcomics. maybe you should slow down and go over the rough outline of the script a few more times.