Konoha high chapter 1 page 11
guitarmt on Aug. 6, 2007
my fourth page today
ok i understand the layout is completly confusing sso the first panel is the one with naruto putting his stuff on his bed the secind is the one with his hand third is the one with sasuke fourth is the one with narutos face the the last is the one with sasukes mouth
Jonko at 8:44PM, Aug. 7, 2007
WOW! 4 colored pages in one day, very impressive. I love how u've incorporated all the characters to the story. I don't think the layout is confusing, just that, if there are clearer lines indicating the separation of each pannel, it would be a lot easier to read. Good job!