chp7 pg1 : Faceplant
bluebug on March 11, 2007
Apologies for the massive update delay. The lineart and partial coloring for this page have been sitting on my computer for a long while because I didn't think I could do justice to what I envisioned in my head. I wanted that first panel especially to pop out of the page, but the carriage and Tyranis just looked horrible in the lineart, and I didn't think I could fix it up with any amount of painting on Photoshop.
In the end, the perfectionist in me is pretty happy with this page. After having received a comment that my coloring way was too bright and shiney, I made an effort to make this page actually look like it was happening at night. Nearly all of the last chapter happened at night, but it wasn't really obvious because my propensity for pretty shiney things.
Anyway, I hope this page makes sense. These characters have already appeared in the comic, but that was way back in Chapter 3.
Characters:
Katrina Ly'tanniel (black hair)
Tyranis (guy)
Nydeira (white haired elf)
Velle (sitting next to Nyderia but not seen on this page)
Ozoneocean at 4:27PM, March 28, 2007
Some issues with the perspective of the coach, but you have to be really anal like me to see it because on first impressions it's all fantabulous! Amazing looking dark scene.
kingofsnake at 8:00AM, March 13, 2007
Quality takes time :)
Nikai Nockturne at 4:13PM, March 12, 2007
O.O....YOU UPDATED!!! YAAAAYYYY!!!
Kalira at 4:07PM, March 12, 2007
The horse and carriage really do look like they are riding out of the page toward you, it looks really great! And I like the pretty shiny things too.
deleted-byrequest-03 at 2:37PM, March 12, 2007
Keep it up!!! It's looking great!
Azaeziel at 1:08PM, March 12, 2007
I liked the pretty shiney colors! An excellent start to the next chapter! (Reminds me a bit of a horror story beginning, you know, with the driver getting killed and no one inside knowing it yet.) Sweet!