LF1 pg 30
TheCreator10490 on Feb. 27, 2010
end of chapter 1
dont worry in the 2nd ch is where the action starts to happen :3
but just to warn u all i may take a little brake to get ahead of my coloring…even though its horrible Dx
oh yeah, should i keep coloring them in or just improve text?
its up to u guys :3
next post: sunday
and ummm to my ppl that commented!
-yes, he's a topless killer X3 he has issues with shirts :/
-and don't worry this is the only thing i guess i “took from there”…but i did this whole ch about 3years ago and i didn't know about Naruto at the time so i thought i was Oringal at the time =(
seeya and enjoy~!
-gabby
Inami Yao at 7:02AM, July 6, 2010
OMG. This is so epic. I love it!! xDDD
Tcb at 9:56PM, March 9, 2010
Cool. Nice twist u actually got me there. Cause i was gettin worried. Lookin forward to chp 2.
PPPchairman at 10:41AM, March 4, 2010
Ohh Gawd. Oh Gawd, Cliffhaaaaaaanger! The coloring looks fine to me and so does the text Except the two bubbles in the first panel I can't make that out. Probably because the color in the bubbles.