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Mutation on Sept. 30, 2007
Encroaching upon us is the storm. It's winds and rain pour down, as we seek to aproach the eye, to cross it and help those beyond.
Hurricanes can kill.
But I've seen a baby live.
This is when things, for me, REALLY start to pick up. This is a smoother stroll into the action then my last attempt. And you soon get to see my favorite expression so far. It's on the page I'm working on, No. 21. I think I'll end chapters at either 30 or 25.
Input?
Say, put ‘Bacon’ in your post if you actually read that.
dueeast at 4:57PM, Dec. 24, 2007
oh, and BACON!
dueeast at 4:57PM, Dec. 24, 2007
Mutation: It's the angle, the tail is being, um, [i]hidden by the dress![/i] Yeah! That's it, and um, it's on the [i]left side[/i]. Yup. Definitely. See, you didn't make a mistake..? o_0
demonbaka_Ryoko at 6:01PM, Dec. 16, 2007
Say... i'll be rebellious and say bacon AND EGGS!!! lawl.. as for Zara's tail... i didn't notice. lol until i read ur comment. I still thinks it looks good regardless of whether Zera-Chan has a tail or not. but on the upside, looks like you had extra time for this page! lol. woot!
Frail at 7:40PM, Dec. 8, 2007
...er... bacon? I won't lie, I didn't notice the missing tail. Buuuut I'm going to pretend she has it in some position that doesn't allow it to be seen from this perspective. ^^ Zara to the rescue! With such pretty hair she's *bound* to win.
Kali at 8:01AM, Oct. 30, 2007
BACON!
Mutation at 4:23PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Oh wow, I forgot Zara's tail and no one noticed.
Mutation at 5:38AM, Oct. 2, 2007
ReiDavidson:I try to make my stories not confusing but sometimes they come out like that. n.n Thankies. Nikai: BACON! You haven't been in the that caffinated mint milk, have you? XeaRi: Yus it is. I'm afraid that my chapters would really vary in that case. Idea: I think I'll just make sure a chapter isn't more then 40 pages, but otherwise vary it. n.n Thanks for the advice though, I love wordful comments. Chaychan: Yay bacon. n.n
reidavidson at 6:43PM, Oct. 1, 2007
I'm a little confused but very intrigued. D:
Nikai Nockturne at 3:17PM, Oct. 1, 2007
BACON!! Oooh...thats sooo cool. weee.
XeaRi at 3:04PM, Oct. 1, 2007
Bacon is good. :) Input on chapter length? Personally I don't like designating a specific number of pages to a chapter. I just let it do what it needs to in as many pages as it needs. Some of my chapters are dreadfully long; others are really short. I tend to give very roundabout advice... ^^'
chaychan at 6:27AM, Oct. 1, 2007
um...bacon?...okay said it now thern ^_^