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Mutation on Sept. 13, 2009
Erk, the page transition between the previous page and this isn't so good. Maybe I should have had Tara still leaning over the table. (No chair.)
All and all, it's an average page, with no drawing mistakes of majorness. I remembered Zara's… leg… warmer… guard things? As well as the shorts under the dress. Oddly, the backgrounds turned out much better. Detailed backgrounds are relatively worth it, I do believe.
Anyway, I think I've got a good grasp on this ‘chapter’, compared to the last two. It should flow more nice a smoothly I think. Maybe I shouldn't have switched to what the ‘evil base’ was doing though. Loses what I had of ‘suspense’. I was going to eventually, but I think it was too soon.
Hmnnnnh… Well, I rushed this page, and for that it turned out okay. *Shrugs.*
ipokino at 2:40AM, Sept. 21, 2009
Hey, I am the same way! I love waking up and knowing I am posting a new page today!!! Woo hoo!!! It really makes for a great start!
Mutation at 9:51PM, Sept. 20, 2009
Man, I love getting up, and realizing 'Setar updates today!' then I feel weird because it's my own comic. Don't worry, I get it for other's comics as well. Man in Black: Thanks for the 5! Magickmaker: I'm glad I remembered to put them on the picture~ Mikato: Totally. Always. Ghostrunner: A good idea I wish I paid attention to while getting lost in video games. unigirl: Indeed! Kali: Feel free to use it? Toshubi: Aye aye captain! *Salute.* Shewolf2: Glad you do, I'm trying to make her have more of a definable personality in my mind. *Thumbs up.* ipokino: I'm content with how I criticize myself. It's the same way for how I do others: Find the bad points, then good ones. magicalmisfits: Aye, so do I. About 2-4 times a day. DariusDrake: By her, you mean Zara? 'cause she might get more bruises then hunger pains. n.n
magickmaker at 4:49PM, Sept. 14, 2009
I'm glad she's wearing shorts under that skirt.
Mikato at 12:30PM, Sept. 14, 2009
lol should always listen to your gut feelings
ghostrunner at 8:56AM, Sept. 14, 2009
good idea
Unigirl at 7:59AM, Sept. 14, 2009
Gut feelings rarely lie.
Kali at 3:34AM, Sept. 14, 2009
I have to remember that line.
Toshubi at 3:04AM, Sept. 14, 2009
Your doing great! Keep those updates coming!
Shewolf2 at 2:33AM, Sept. 14, 2009
Lol ^_^ I like her... And you're doing well, keep it coming ^_^
ipokino at 2:20AM, Sept. 14, 2009
I tend to quite worrying about the page 'issues' once I post it...you can criticize yourself to death that way...just trust your instincts and let the story flow...seems to be working so far!
magicalmisfits at 10:29PM, Sept. 13, 2009
I get that all the time!
Darius Drake at 10:15PM, Sept. 13, 2009
Ah, those are the most common gut feelings that I get. I wonder if it's the same for her.