Interesting ... I'm not sure I like it either ... it seems a little crazy in the pacing, dialog, and the frame placement. After the first two panels I'm not exactly sure how to read the rest so I'm inclined to go right to the last panel ... the one with the RED LETTERS that are so easy to focus on ... Keep posting!
TeeniMeeni at 9:19AM, June 2, 2008
I had no problems reading it. I especially like the "gak" scene XD
hanshi at 12:24AM, Dec. 14, 2006
Yeah, I kind of suck that way. I'm somewhat new to the comic panelling thang. ^^ Thank you for the comment, though.
Mr Mustard Seed at 8:42PM, Dec. 13, 2006
Interesting ... I'm not sure I like it either ... it seems a little crazy in the pacing, dialog, and the frame placement. After the first two panels I'm not exactly sure how to read the rest so I'm inclined to go right to the last panel ... the one with the RED LETTERS that are so easy to focus on ... Keep posting!