I like this, it is clean and clear. :)
But what lets it down slightly is the text-placement in the last panel. You miss the gag slightly because it is behind the speech. Maybe be a bit more careful mapping out your bubbles, as there's plenty room for the speech lower down in that panel.
underhand at 2:30PM, March 21, 2006
Ooh thanks for that! I know that I sometimes do squish up my writing, and I'll certainly try to work on it :)
Wolfy at 2:26PM, March 21, 2006
I like this, it is clean and clear. :) But what lets it down slightly is the text-placement in the last panel. You miss the gag slightly because it is behind the speech. Maybe be a bit more careful mapping out your bubbles, as there's plenty room for the speech lower down in that panel.