The Intro (and power) of Elysia
lordofthegames on June 29, 2007
This is, in my opinion, a BIG improvement over the first page. Here, the talking chao Elysia takes over my role, and Elpizo learns to respect her authoritah.
Also, the plot summary I gave in no.1 is now dropped, since it was a poor idea. I think it shows here.
Leon the Armadilldo at 9:26PM, June 30, 2007
Also! FIRST COMENT! WOO! -throwes cookies everywhere-
Leon the Armadilldo at 9:25PM, June 30, 2007
Yes... a lot better... but it still needs improvements... im willing to help but you just need to PQ me... im not sure if that guy is a REAL assistant but if not im happy to be your assistant... PS Awesome Chao!