Not bad, but I seriously recommend using a straight-edge on mechanical objects like the DDR pad. The characters get lost in all the curves. The bodies themselves could use some work too, but I don't have any straightforward advice on that one.
Anyway, I think this would look better if you had some blacks and greys throughout, not just in the last panel. It would really help the characters stand out from their background, which as I've said is a bit of a problem with the art.
mymindislost at 12:13AM, Jan. 12, 2006
Utena is an AWESOME show. I have always loved this. It is hilarious. :D!!!!!!!
Inkmonkey at 8:06PM, Jan. 10, 2006
Not bad, but I seriously recommend using a straight-edge on mechanical objects like the DDR pad. The characters get lost in all the curves. The bodies themselves could use some work too, but I don't have any straightforward advice on that one. Anyway, I think this would look better if you had some blacks and greys throughout, not just in the last panel. It would really help the characters stand out from their background, which as I've said is a bit of a problem with the art.
Popedchach at 7:19PM, Jan. 10, 2006
ROSATO!!!!!! yeah!!!!!!!!
magickmaker at 4:59PM, Jan. 10, 2006
Huh, never seen it. Funny, though.