City of Intrigue pg 1
Lord Rend on Oct. 14, 2008
This page actually took a lot longer than I intended it to since my computer was not cooperating. Still, it turned out fairly well, although there are a couple issues with the shading I am not particularly happy about… Still, any constructive critique is welcome.
Also a couple quick notes:
1. The colored spheres that float around Lockre are his other personalities. No one but him can see or hear them.
2. The ‘dome’ on the left side of the top panel is an atmospheric shield, they are used on the world of Tyn (the world this story takes place on) to block wind and rain.
Also, hopefully soon I will have links to character and world setting information, although those are lower priority than the comic itself and highly dependent on my free time.
Hope you enjoy the page.
R Cain at 2:05PM, Nov. 21, 2008
Yay anthro characters! I mean- that yawning orb is adorable. I MEAN! I like the way Lockre's shadow falls over Mira's face in her introductory panel. Not being able to see her eyes makes her an intriguing character somehow, just like I wonder what Lockre sees when he's glaring off into the distance. But I kind of got confused in the second panel, because I read it left to right, and it seems the speech bubbles read right to left. I'll get the hang of it! And Lockre's red-eyed personality is now my favorite. ("Blasphemy!" ^^)