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waterspirit on Feb. 15, 2006
yep 2 pages like I promised tomorrow there may be another update depending but for sure on saterday there will be two updates lol so enjoy this second one… chapter two coming up :)
the last two pages in this chapter are…. different I'll tell you that much they will for sure be coloured
waterspirit at 7:27PM, Feb. 18, 2006
e-mail me @ gamergirlgr@hotmail.com
waterspirit at 8:36AM, Feb. 18, 2006
ha... sorry update will be..... delayed for now sorry btwrmccool umm well on the form I was looking for a webdesigner to help with links and stuff someone who can do html I wasn't advertising my comic lol and yeah I know my introduction sucked that's cause I wasn't sure how far I'd draw the comic if it would have much of a story or not now I just got to much for it lol
SailorPoison at 8:40PM, Feb. 17, 2006
That poor poor kid lol
rmccool at 2:15PM, Feb. 17, 2006
oh and i can't spell so forgive me that please i try... always see all the mess up after i hit say it..
rmccool at 2:14PM, Feb. 17, 2006
ok looked over the whole thing..you make it sound bad..its not it ruff but not bad some pages stand out a lot more then others..quality is better then quonity.. make less do them better in other word.. in the forum the way you talk about it there and your intro is like oh jee here is a comic ..it almost sounds like you don't want it read.. pretend your job is to write move intros or the back of books you want what you are writing about to sale. you want your work this comic to grab the eye of the reader make them want to read it. tell me it is fast passed action story about a girl that kills vampires...ok not trying to be mean or anny thing trying to be helpfull.