Short_Circuiting at 2:56PM, Aug. 26, 2007

yay apocalypse!

ChainiaC at 5:48AM, May 30, 2007

Hey Chip, Thanks for the feedback. I see your point about the story. It is like a rollercoaster ride with Liz having next to no control over it... so far. This is partly as intended becouse I feel the reader should know some of the things that happened to her during her development. The fact that she doesnt have control is a part of that. But on the other hand, it is also maybe a bit over-paced because I might be rusing the story because it is so huge. I'll keep your critique in mind.

lothar at 3:26AM, May 26, 2007

this story has taken a strange turn since i last checked ! and i like it !!

cs3ink at 9:30AM, May 25, 2007

The art is very Corben, and very enjoyable to look at. Really wondrful illos. The writing feels sorta forced, as does the plotting. I can feel the plot moving the character, as opposed to the character creating the plot. It's a funky distinction, I know, but I wished the story flowed as easily as the art does. I like the twisted Alice in Wonderland thing, & I'll certainly be back to follow this. Later, Chip