dragoon101 at 7:45PM, Feb. 20, 2008

@wars: dude thats alot of text

ace400x at 12:43PM, Oct. 10, 2007

no spaming v.v that meens you down there!!! v.v

Warspritecomic at 7:51AM, July 15, 2007

You say this is your first attempt at a comic? Then it is amazing. Anyways there is one problem that I can spot, and it is a minor one. It's about speech bubbles. It's only the fact that they look a bit messy when they are overlapping and that the tails are a bit too long for some of them. The first one I pointed out probably can't be helped but the second one could be helped by bringing to speech bubbles closer to the sprites. If you find it hard due to the other speech bubble, then you could maybe change the size of the font down a bit so they are a bit smaller so you can put them in better places. Other than that it is an amazing comic and you should be proud of yourself. You are doing a lot better than most sprite comics first time mainly because the jokes aren't clichéd (so much) and it's actually funny. Keep it up ^__^