@ KademonsterX: Don't worry I know I just recolored my characters I'm still messing around with my sprites I would like to make my characters go through an upgrade later on in the story plus most of my friends chose they're colors. I would gladly accept any help to improve and thanks for the feedback KademonsterX.
@ UltimateNMCH: Yup you got that right.
You story isn't half bad, but re-coloring ProtoMan's scarf and calling him you really doesn't put interest in your character. And re-colors never make authentic characters, it's unoriginal, and shows you skills as a spriter are minimal at most. The best thing you can do is create some characters that stand out and speak volumes about themselves upon appearance. Other than that, your backgrounds are great, and your text boxes are great, my rating on this was really sore because of the unoriginal re-colors. Any body can change colors with paint. Good luck in the future.
ALzero at 4:20PM, Dec. 14, 2010
@ KademonsterX: Don't worry I know I just recolored my characters I'm still messing around with my sprites I would like to make my characters go through an upgrade later on in the story plus most of my friends chose they're colors. I would gladly accept any help to improve and thanks for the feedback KademonsterX. @ UltimateNMCH: Yup you got that right.
KademonsterX at 10:38PM, Dec. 6, 2010
You story isn't half bad, but re-coloring ProtoMan's scarf and calling him you really doesn't put interest in your character. And re-colors never make authentic characters, it's unoriginal, and shows you skills as a spriter are minimal at most. The best thing you can do is create some characters that stand out and speak volumes about themselves upon appearance. Other than that, your backgrounds are great, and your text boxes are great, my rating on this was really sore because of the unoriginal re-colors. Any body can change colors with paint. Good luck in the future.
UltimateNMCH at 10:33PM, Dec. 6, 2010
and he still doesn't believe them. neon is an idiot