Chapter 2: Leap | 58
xmung on Nov. 28, 2010
Always good to have a secret weapon up your… er… tentacles! When I was writing this story this was always the intended outcome (sometimes things can be a bit more nebulous) - I didn't want Kaycee and Fatima to come first, that would be stretching it a bit I think, but third is perfectly respectable.
Ozmandious at 6:17AM, Dec. 2, 2010
pop it and rock it
AzuJOD at 2:32PM, Nov. 29, 2010
Third is good, it means you still get a medal and a place on the podium.
alschroeder at 6:12AM, Nov. 29, 2010
Yeah, to have them win over the speed-enhanced and all the fliers (at least one would go first) would be a little much. Third is great!
Lemniskate at 4:21AM, Nov. 29, 2010
Charisma is such a chew toy one has to wonder when she'll turn evil.
God of War at 2:11AM, Nov. 29, 2010
I have to say, this is the chapter when Magellan really caught me on and story only grew on me later.