Chapter 4: Bad Karma | 300
xmung on Dec. 14, 2011
And here it is, the end of Bad Karma! The end of Chapter 4! 300 pages! woo! Certainly it was the longest story I'd ever told - I really thought it was going to be a 100 pages or so when I started, but I kept adding threads as I wrote it which spun it to a much longer read. Originally it took 3 years to tell and became engrossing for me and readers. There are a couple of things I would change if I were to redo it but overall I'm very happy with it and think it holds up well when read as a whole.
I'm not updating on the 15th but will kick off with a short story about cadet Gifford Foss on the 16th.
Next: Reckless Hero!
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Mr Kaos at 7:16AM, Dec. 15, 2011
she is not going to be evil.. or good i guess. so she might end as an anti hero. hmm.
xmung at 12:08AM, Dec. 15, 2011
@meemjar: the Magellanverse as we see it is now split off from the future world from which all the future versions came... so anything's possible! Yeah, I suppose it did get pretty dark - but hopefully there's still some light moments ahead!
man in black at 7:14PM, Dec. 14, 2011
great page
meemjar at 3:56PM, Dec. 14, 2011
Does this mean the evil future bitch will mend her ways before she even commits them? That could cause a 'Planet of the Apes' paradox. But you know, this whole series is like Harry Potter. It starts out as light-hearted and quirky, but slowly darkens as time goes on.
jamoecw at 12:31PM, Dec. 14, 2011
poor coward, though she had it coming.