This is a pretty well made comic. The visuals are nice, the text bubbles are easy to read, and the movement effects are pretty.
The only thing I have to complain about is it's just not entertaining to read. I personally don't think "MMMMM. Rice Crispies" is funny or anything else in the comic thusfar. Just work on the jokes and you'll have a pretty decent comic.
The text in the thought bubble should be opacity'd too..
Also, you need to work on your commas still. You have some, but you have wrong punctuation in other parts that commas should be at. Aaaand, some spots that don't have commas.
Edsel at 2:54PM, April 11, 2007
This is a pretty well made comic. The visuals are nice, the text bubbles are easy to read, and the movement effects are pretty. The only thing I have to complain about is it's just not entertaining to read. I personally don't think "MMMMM. Rice Crispies" is funny or anything else in the comic thusfar. Just work on the jokes and you'll have a pretty decent comic.
id0ntneedy0uux at 4:17PM, April 10, 2007
great comic so far!! can't wait to put up my guest comic tomorrow!
eric825 at 4:12PM, April 10, 2007
@yoshirider4 dude im sorry, my R/L sister wanted to assist :\
yoshirider4 at 4:06PM, April 10, 2007
I'm not assisting anymore?
KevinClifford at 2:30PM, April 10, 2007
The text in the thought bubble should be opacity'd too.. Also, you need to work on your commas still. You have some, but you have wrong punctuation in other parts that commas should be at. Aaaand, some spots that don't have commas.
alex2000 at 2:19PM, April 10, 2007
lol