Awesome art. Kind of wonky layouts, that do not mix well with the quick transition to superhero "form". The first time she transforms is a tad confusing. The dialogues are good, and the story interesting enough to keep me reading, but the start (first 5-6 pages, everything before the battle at the park) is kind of terrible. The comment looks pretty negative, but I am trying to be constructive in my criticism. As I said at the start, the art is awesome. Practice more, and I can see you as a professional! :)
Oh! And the colour is impressive!
Nice work here - very satisfying to pick up and read a few pages. I regerestered your page on an old dinosaur webcomic monitoring page - thewebcomiclist.com
Feel free to get inside and re-write stuff.
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http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/23980/Masked
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Yay! Your comic is awesome, make sure to check the frontpage newspost and listen to this week's Quackcast on Tuesday where it will be featured again along with a light discussion.
Jawa at 3:01PM, Nov. 26, 2013
Awesome art. Kind of wonky layouts, that do not mix well with the quick transition to superhero "form". The first time she transforms is a tad confusing. The dialogues are good, and the story interesting enough to keep me reading, but the start (first 5-6 pages, everything before the battle at the park) is kind of terrible. The comment looks pretty negative, but I am trying to be constructive in my criticism. As I said at the start, the art is awesome. Practice more, and I can see you as a professional! :) Oh! And the colour is impressive!
skythorn at 3:27AM, Nov. 23, 2013
Nice work here - very satisfying to pick up and read a few pages. I regerestered your page on an old dinosaur webcomic monitoring page - thewebcomiclist.com Feel free to get inside and re-write stuff. --------- http://www.thewebcomiclist.com/p/23980/Masked --------- -------
irrevenant at 2:48PM, Nov. 22, 2013
Congrats on the feature. I love, love, LOVE your art, but I've found the story a bit hard to follow other than in broad strokes. Kind of... jerky?
KimLuster at 4:59AM, Nov. 18, 2013
Great graveyard
kawaiidaigakusei at 10:37PM, Nov. 17, 2013
Yay! Your comic is awesome, make sure to check the frontpage newspost and listen to this week's Quackcast on Tuesday where it will be featured again along with a light discussion.
Kou the Mad at 10:22PM, Nov. 17, 2013
FEATURE!
UncreativeName at 9:31PM, Nov. 17, 2013
I'm a fan.