This is pretty good.
I take it the series was inspired by that Robot Chicken FFVII sketch? The "unpaid overtime" thing and the fact that Sephiroth is the boss was sort of a dead give away. S'all good, though, some of the best fan creations out there were inspired by stuff like that. I don't recall them ever mentioning in the sketch what kind of food the restaurant served (or for that matter, what kind of meat they used or where they got it), so it's good to see that you added a couple of little things to the concept to make it your own.
Anyway, I really like your Megaman recolors, and I think that the comic as a whole is pretty good. I honestly like the 3/4 view, as it's something you don't see very often in a sprite comic. My only suggestion would be to maybe use shades of light black (or rather, really dark shades of grey, not quite black)instead of blue for the empty space. That's the color that the empty spaces are in most backgrounds in games with a 3/4 view, and plus, the bright blue that you use is pretty distracting. The first thing that catches the reader's eye when they see your strips is this unsightly bright shade of cerulean, when they should be paying attention to the comic itself.
The only other thing I'd recommend (and this one is actually a bit more important) is that you check your spelling by pasting the text into Microsoft Word (or another program that has spell check) before you put it in the strips. It makes it easier on the reader and makes your work look a lot more professional if you don't have a bunch of typos.
Other than that, keep up the good work.
lordofthegames at 5:09PM, April 28, 2007
....did Seph just Sin Harvest Cloud?? if so, he shouldn't be dead, just VERY VERY near-death
Krotar at 7:40AM, April 19, 2007
Random explosions are always fun!
noxmodel001 at 2:02PM, Jan. 19, 2007
lol! That's awesome!
raven37 at 4:18AM, Jan. 18, 2007
Poor Cloud. You mean there's more? Whoa.
redxiii at 12:24PM, Jan. 17, 2007
oh shizot
riku valentine at 9:03AM, Jan. 17, 2007
lol nice explosion!
TBustah at 8:47AM, Jan. 17, 2007
This is pretty good. I take it the series was inspired by that Robot Chicken FFVII sketch? The "unpaid overtime" thing and the fact that Sephiroth is the boss was sort of a dead give away. S'all good, though, some of the best fan creations out there were inspired by stuff like that. I don't recall them ever mentioning in the sketch what kind of food the restaurant served (or for that matter, what kind of meat they used or where they got it), so it's good to see that you added a couple of little things to the concept to make it your own. Anyway, I really like your Megaman recolors, and I think that the comic as a whole is pretty good. I honestly like the 3/4 view, as it's something you don't see very often in a sprite comic. My only suggestion would be to maybe use shades of light black (or rather, really dark shades of grey, not quite black)instead of blue for the empty space. That's the color that the empty spaces are in most backgrounds in games with a 3/4 view, and plus, the bright blue that you use is pretty distracting. The first thing that catches the reader's eye when they see your strips is this unsightly bright shade of cerulean, when they should be paying attention to the comic itself. The only other thing I'd recommend (and this one is actually a bit more important) is that you check your spelling by pasting the text into Microsoft Word (or another program that has spell check) before you put it in the strips. It makes it easier on the reader and makes your work look a lot more professional if you don't have a bunch of typos. Other than that, keep up the good work.
Kitty Man at 8:04AM, Jan. 17, 2007
lol nice
Bekefel at 8:00AM, Jan. 17, 2007
Only thing in need of fixing is the spelling. Good otherwise.
vgman at 7:44AM, Jan. 17, 2007
hahahaha that looks incredibly painfull
UltraZero at 6:44AM, Jan. 17, 2007
It's the attack of the Cloud clones!