How ciel survives
xv2000 on Sept. 19, 2006
Well I dicided that, since my 1st page was to big, im gonna make the rest of my pages 6 panels each
xv2000 on Sept. 19, 2006
Well I dicided that, since my 1st page was to big, im gonna make the rest of my pages 6 panels each
theduckofanime at 7:20AM, Sept. 20, 2006
You seem to be missing some of the action beats here. One would be the scene transition to Ceil fleeing from the big guy, two the other guy even showing up, and she fled to a dead end. Also Ceil doesn't really feel rushed at the last few pannels, it seems more like a lazy stroll. Try and work on your writing, it appears your trying to do more than you can actually pull off here.
RoronoaZoro at 7:01AM, Sept. 20, 2006
nice comic.