This comic is entertaining so far. It would probably look better if you drew it with a black pen though. Nothing fancy just a regular pen that makes solid lines of the sort you can get for cheap at any regular store. Most of my really early comics I made when I was 11 I made with either a pencil or a blue BIC pen and looking back I would consider that one was one of the many mistakes I made.
THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE AND ADVICE BRO, AND FOR READING!! I ACTUALLY SKETCH THIS COMIC DURING MY 30 MIN LUNCH BREAKS, THEN SNEAK AND UPLOAD WHEN I CAN LOL, IVE GOT MY " D M JINN" COMIC THAT I TAKE SERIOUS, I GO OVER IT WITH PEN! COLORED COVERS TOO! IF YOUVE GOT SOMETHING I'L CHECK IT OUT!
awsome owl 98 at 8:23PM, Aug. 28, 2018
This comic is entertaining so far. It would probably look better if you drew it with a black pen though. Nothing fancy just a regular pen that makes solid lines of the sort you can get for cheap at any regular store. Most of my really early comics I made when I was 11 I made with either a pencil or a blue BIC pen and looking back I would consider that one was one of the many mistakes I made.
MC Davis Comics at 2:45PM, Aug. 31, 2018
THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE AND ADVICE BRO, AND FOR READING!! I ACTUALLY SKETCH THIS COMIC DURING MY 30 MIN LUNCH BREAKS, THEN SNEAK AND UPLOAD WHEN I CAN LOL, IVE GOT MY " D M JINN" COMIC THAT I TAKE SERIOUS, I GO OVER IT WITH PEN! COLORED COVERS TOO! IF YOUVE GOT SOMETHING I'L CHECK IT OUT!