Memento Mori, Page 3

Xiam on Aug. 11, 2009

I am suddenly happy I decided to color that jacket.

I actually had to rewrite much of the first half of Scene 30, primarily due to a rewrite of Scene 29, which has much to do with a redesign of the orphanage itself.

Also because I didn't think of the logistics of… well, the size of the front lawn. Supernatural tackles fixed that though. I thought I'd have to retcon the size, really.

One of the rewrites involved meant that the punchline of this page - Ace's crack about getting in the way - is now halfway through. Which is fine, I'm tired of ending with someone's smartass quip. Let's get some plot twists going!