Arc: Ahh, okay. Thanks, and sorry if I came off as a bit rude as well. XD But I'll take your advice to mind, thanks.
Kurosaki: Heh, yeah. He seems weird, no? XP
Don't worry I'm not a rude kind of guy. I 'm just trying to help. Everything else is done well that's why I didn't comment on them. I'm going to keep my eye on this.
Sorry if i sounded rude the first time.
-Arc
Arc:
For the backgrounds, I already know of internet sites with actual backgrounds, but I choose not to use them for now, since it has to do with the story, so please bear with it.
I do realize the speech bubbles were oddly placed, and the "tails" of the speech bubbles are odd, or misshapen.
Just as something else though, if you need to criticize, could you also pick out something you like as well next time? Just seeing the "con's" of something doesn't seem too encouraging, although I'm not trying to get a forced ego boost.
I understand what you mean, and I'll try to fix the speech bubbles, but for the backgrounds, I can't stop using Gradients just yet. There's a reasoning behind it.
This isn''t bad however there are some things that need to be said.
You should use real backgrounds, not gradients.
Go to the spriters resource and get some, if you can't find backgrounds for this game then find one that looks good with it.
Also put the speech bubbles tails next to the head. Flere's speech bubble placements are awful in the first two panels work on it.
foozdude at 4:06PM, Sept. 1, 2007
Arc: Ahh, okay. Thanks, and sorry if I came off as a bit rude as well. XD But I'll take your advice to mind, thanks. Kurosaki: Heh, yeah. He seems weird, no? XP
Kurosaki_Ichigo at 3:43PM, Sept. 1, 2007
he's arguing with himself? what's with this dude? (biometal guy)
Arc at 2:46PM, Sept. 1, 2007
Don't worry I'm not a rude kind of guy. I 'm just trying to help. Everything else is done well that's why I didn't comment on them. I'm going to keep my eye on this. Sorry if i sounded rude the first time. -Arc
foozdude at 2:27PM, Sept. 1, 2007
Arc: For the backgrounds, I already know of internet sites with actual backgrounds, but I choose not to use them for now, since it has to do with the story, so please bear with it. I do realize the speech bubbles were oddly placed, and the "tails" of the speech bubbles are odd, or misshapen. Just as something else though, if you need to criticize, could you also pick out something you like as well next time? Just seeing the "con's" of something doesn't seem too encouraging, although I'm not trying to get a forced ego boost. I understand what you mean, and I'll try to fix the speech bubbles, but for the backgrounds, I can't stop using Gradients just yet. There's a reasoning behind it.
Arc at 9:23AM, Sept. 1, 2007
This isn''t bad however there are some things that need to be said. You should use real backgrounds, not gradients. Go to the spriters resource and get some, if you can't find backgrounds for this game then find one that looks good with it. Also put the speech bubbles tails next to the head. Flere's speech bubble placements are awful in the first two panels work on it.
Blaze Dragon at 8:10AM, Sept. 1, 2007
I mena, wtf? He doesn't knows what HE feels!? Oh, and sorry for the double post, some of my post got deleted.
Blaze Dragon at 8:10AM, Sept. 1, 2007
That guy's a weirdo