In my opinion this is the best dialogue so for, though the last lines "YOU MAY CONTINUE YOUR SONG" and "do you think about the past often" felt relatively lacking to me. I think they only appear this way next to the powerhouse prose you put previous to them.
oldguy85 at 3:54PM, Aug. 25, 2009
Crazy story, and I like the easier to read font too.
The Real Macabre at 4:58PM, Dec. 1, 2008
In my opinion this is the best dialogue so for, though the last lines "YOU MAY CONTINUE YOUR SONG" and "do you think about the past often" felt relatively lacking to me. I think they only appear this way next to the powerhouse prose you put previous to them.