I'm trying to do exposition that doesn't look like exposition. I don't want to explain, but I also don't want to write pretentious crap. Gee, it's a thin line to thread.
I know what you mean. Or rather I think I do. I don't like writing exposition in general but it can be even worse if it seems forced.
This page is interesting for the fact the words are well-composed and poetic, it seems to pause the comic a bit though.
Kristen Gudsnuk at 2:38PM, March 12, 2009
ick I just said beauteous
Kristen Gudsnuk at 2:38PM, March 12, 2009
beauteous writing... Ludeshka, you have an ear for poetry :)
patrickdevine at 12:18AM, Jan. 6, 2009
I know what you mean. Or rather I think I do. I don't like writing exposition in general but it can be even worse if it seems forced. This page is interesting for the fact the words are well-composed and poetic, it seems to pause the comic a bit though.
The Derkomai at 12:04PM, Nov. 28, 2008
...mmmmmmmh