The art is promising, although I'd recommend fixing your image size, even on a wide screen monitor I'm finding it hard to see the comic properly.
Also I think you need to work on the writing a bit...what writing there is I mean. Look into the characters a bit better before you start throwing out punchlines.
Anyway, good luck :-)
Anch0vy at 10:05AM, Jan. 18, 2007
The art is promising, although I'd recommend fixing your image size, even on a wide screen monitor I'm finding it hard to see the comic properly. Also I think you need to work on the writing a bit...what writing there is I mean. Look into the characters a bit better before you start throwing out punchlines. Anyway, good luck :-)