Chapter One- Page 7
D0m on May 31, 2007
WOW.
This thing took me about as long as page 6 did (which was pretty long).
I do like how it came out, though. At some point, I was really fed up with it, but it did exactly what I wanted it to from the beginning. The lightning lit the room up, and ___'s face ended up looking creepy enough! (You didn't think we'd give away their names yet, did you?) If you got any questions, ask em down there and I'll answer ‘em up here.
As per usual- comments, faves, and love is always welcome!
Answers:
Silverwordz: I’d love to know what I can do to put some more kick into this font… by the time I get around to the font portion of the comic, I already spent hours on the thing and wanna finish already… =P
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Penmaster at 5:15PM, Jan. 16, 2012
wicked!
katyas at 9:05PM, May 10, 2008
Nothing wrong with spiders - they freak us out b/c they are so wise and b/c they are predators. All the spinning and destiny stuff, etc. Spider-Woman is especially tricksy. However, this old lady is, I agree, creepy as hell. *shivers* Especially the moving her head with her hand thing - like the body isn't really ... hers...
Frozen Oasis at 3:20AM, Feb. 6, 2008
hahahaha
Potato U Princess at 2:05PM, Dec. 22, 2007
Panel 5 frightens me! O_O No wonder she looks so scared in the 3rd panel... That old lady has VENOM dribbling out of her mouth!
Rutger at 1:34PM, Nov. 14, 2007
I love the look of horror in her eyes in the third panel...awesome art!
jgib99 at 5:22PM, Oct. 31, 2007
That second panel is just made of awesomeness!!
Fitz at 10:07AM, Oct. 16, 2007
Fear of old ladies with spider-like shadows, drooling with venom ;) You did a great job here in those hints that she's not what she appears to be.
simonitro at 11:13AM, Oct. 14, 2007
Ergh... that's so damn gross and eerie.
mishi_hime at 5:17PM, Aug. 4, 2007
spiderwoman?
keithmccleary at 12:26PM, Aug. 1, 2007
Okay, that old lady is CREEEPY. Well done.
MrSynnerster at 4:42AM, July 24, 2007
I just stumbled upon yo ur comic. great work so far.
TheMidge28 at 7:45AM, July 21, 2007
Great page I love the spider queens shadow! also I agree on font choice. Have checked out sites like www.dafont.com? Great warehouse of free fonts you can download.
CharleyHorse at 5:50AM, June 8, 2007
Woah . . . powerful artwork and storytelling!
MetalLuigi at 11:00PM, June 7, 2007
I like the artwork. Very nicely done. And the suspense is killing me! Keep it going :)
ian_feverdream at 7:42AM, June 4, 2007
Nice face shot in third panel. The shadow in the second panel looks more like the outline of a spider. Foreshadowing? Be careful on your font. Your purpose is to tell a story, and if you choose a hard to read font, it may make it hard to read your story.
Jackjny at 7:23PM, June 3, 2007
Great looking page & great intrigue on the story!
slimredninja at 8:05AM, June 2, 2007
nice stuff old women dribbling green bile from their mouths is awesome great looking page
SilverWordz at 9:59PM, June 1, 2007
The shadows are neat. ;) And the eye effect is really nice. Have you thought about using a different font for the text bubbles? Nothing over the top, but maybe a bit more stylized with the mood of the comic. PS I fav'd you a few days ago, but just getting around to posting my first comment. :)
The World of Witt at 7:49PM, June 1, 2007
Creepier than a Catholic priest at a cub scout convention. Nice job.
silentkitty at 6:38PM, June 1, 2007
Really nice job showing the cinematic effect with the eyes in the third panel. I also notice your text bubbles are getting smoother, they're looking good now. :) And that old lady is creepy, haha