Chapter One Page 16
D0m on July 27, 2007
:-) Cool, huh?
This page took me a bit to make, because I was looking at a buncha YouTube videos and such. Speaking of YouTube, check these out.
http://youtube.com/user/generaldom
I love how the moons came out- they were kind of webbed. Any takers on trying to figure out what the blue orb means? I can tell you they're not in any other dimension this time around. ( That would be the red orb)
Since they're in the Shadowlands now, don't forget about the henchmen (are they friend or foe?). I had trouble with the pencilling and inking on Nadya's face. She looks less attractive here, which was my fault. It's in those weird, high nostrils. Those'll be taken care of on the next page.
Vote for Nadya at TWC and see the rest of this painting of Harry Potter: 
and for Buzzcomics, you'll see a painting of Kaitlyn, a friend of mine:
Thanks for everyone who checks up on Nadya regularly!
Penmaster at 5:21PM, Jan. 16, 2012
lol -I am -...
katyas at 10:09PM, May 10, 2008
Orb ... orb ... orb ... orb ... BOOBIES ... orb ... orb ... orb ... *ahem* Don't mind me - I'm going slightly maaaaddd!!
Rutger at 1:42PM, Nov. 14, 2007
Fantastic sarcasm going on there. Man, I wish I was getting as many comments as you are...
Fitz at 11:00AM, Oct. 16, 2007
I actually didn't even notice there was something wrong with the nostrils. I was absolutely mesmerized by her eyes. She looks almost TOO real. And that amusement/bemusement on her face is hilarious. There Charna is, trying to be all cryptic, and she's making fun of the fantasy genre, which seems to rely on those spooky names to an annoying level, sometimes.
simonitro at 11:45AM, Oct. 14, 2007
That was quick to pas over the shadowland. Indeed, this is a great page.
gsp at 7:09AM, Aug. 4, 2007
Oh wow, yes I'll be here every time you post Love it! - gsp
EmilyTheStrange at 5:13AM, Aug. 4, 2007
That first panel is absolutely breath taking. O_O I love how you colored it, its so beautiful!
SilverWordz at 8:41PM, Aug. 3, 2007
Did I really miss two updates? I love the scenery and the sky in that first panel. The expression in the last panel is hard for me to place though. It almost seems like she's sad.
jmt at 8:33PM, Aug. 3, 2007
the hard dramatic lighting in the last two frames work really well.
D0m at 6:05PM, Aug. 3, 2007
Keithmcleary- I think I'll look into that as soon as I can, thanks for the great input! RabbitMaster- Glad you noticed! Hehe Nibbi- Welcome, and thanks for stopping by!
nibbi at 2:16PM, Aug. 3, 2007
Wow awesome art. I'm going to go back and read from the begining.
Broken Aroow at 2:12PM, Aug. 3, 2007
i love how she is drawn, and i love the cheeky disbeliving smile. the pages just look so great
dangerfunk at 10:18AM, Aug. 3, 2007
Haha, that last panel's kinda funny. I'd imagine her saying "oh, okay."
I heart artists at 8:11AM, Aug. 3, 2007
Love the moons, too! There's so much atmosphere in your renderings!
RabbitMaster at 8:01AM, Aug. 3, 2007
Always pleasantly surpirsed at the growth in quality from page to page.
Stabby Team USA at 9:46PM, Aug. 2, 2007
Your art is shiny, I like it
ximerika at 4:56PM, Aug. 1, 2007
your pictures and paintings are scary realistic!
keithmccleary at 12:32PM, Aug. 1, 2007
Hey there, just got finished reading through your stuff...the art is definitely improving over the last couple pages. I'm still not sure about the fonts you're using, though. These are so ornate, they seem to clash with the softness of your art. But kudos on those sweet-looking orbs!
MrRiot at 4:16AM, Aug. 1, 2007
Oh, WOW. Your digital work is beautiful! I especially love the lighting on the face in the bottom of the page. Five'd and fave'd for sure.
D0m at 6:56PM, July 31, 2007
JustNoPoint- That's exactly what I was thinking when I drew her like that! :-P And I'm glad you like my backgrounds, hehe. Metaluigi- Thanks! The mountains are getting to be easier for me to make. You should check out some speed painting videos on YouTube. PeiPei- Thanks, girlfriend! ;-) Silentkitty- Thank you! Page 13 is always my guide with the lighting, hehe... And I'm still perfecting Nadya's sneer! Maybonics- Thanks! But I don't think I can compare myself to your style. :-) FAL- You're right.. thanks for the crit! Crave the Bullet- By all means, do so! KellyMarie- And it
KellyMarie at 8:11PM, July 30, 2007
I love the last panel.
Crave The Bullet at 7:34PM, July 30, 2007
I want to rub this page on myself...
FAL at 12:43PM, July 30, 2007
Yeah, beautifuly done my friend! you're too good with the face lighting. The only thing I miss is a little more detail on the mountains and the bridge to bring it to the same level as your faces.
Hyptosis at 10:18AM, July 30, 2007
haha, love the last panel! =P
maddog at 4:42PM, July 29, 2007
Your artwork is superb, and the story is very gripping