Chapter One Page 17
D0m on Aug. 3, 2007
Ah, you gotta love that woman!
In this page, I finally drop the whole ‘Queen’ thing, and I'll probably call her Nadya from now on. ( I do like the Queen as a nickname, though)
I meant to tell you that the bridge is just a time-lapse thing. It makes you travel incredible distances in short periods of time.
New page coming soon, since it's going to pretty much be a single panel thing. The chapter'll be ending in about 3 pages- and then, a much needed change of scenery.
Vote for Nadya at TWC and see the rest of this painting of a dragonfly I made: 
and for Buzzcomics, you'll see a silly illustration I made:
Thanks for everyone who checks up on Nadya regularly!
katyas at 11:18PM, May 10, 2008
"I'm the QUEEN, how dare you tell me to hush!"
Fitz at 11:04AM, Oct. 16, 2007
I love the expression on Nadya's face in the last panel. Royally pissed, so to speak ;) Again, she looks like Jennifer Connely. On the previous page she made me think of Robin Tunney.
simonitro at 11:47AM, Oct. 14, 2007
"Uh... hey, I was talking!"
RabbitMaster at 12:04PM, Aug. 9, 2007
Nadya looks a little miffed
TitanOne at 1:51PM, Aug. 8, 2007
Great page--beautifully colored. Also I like the fact that the shadow woman and Nadya are making friends...in a lot of fantasy webcomics, there is constant verbal jousting between characters that never seems to end, and it grows tiresome after a few pages. Here she says "pretty name. It suits you." Good turn.
polo at 6:07AM, Aug. 7, 2007
I love your style!
_T_ at 4:55PM, Aug. 6, 2007
lol how rude!
D0m at 11:03AM, Aug. 6, 2007
Silentkitty- Thanks, Sarah!
D0m at 10:53AM, Aug. 6, 2007
Dueast- Charna is pretty much like an angry mother as of now. =P She's sick of the talking, already. Glad you like the story's pacing! SilverWordz- Yeah, Nadya was going to give away really personal information about herself- and to a commoner! Wyrvnn and Jissai- Thanks! Skyangel- I'm kinda surprised too! The story'll get lighter in the chapter after next, heh... KellyMarie- That's a great idea you've got. On the next page, I promise. BLNT- Thanks for following Nadya from the beginng! MrRiot and Vindibudd- Thanks much! Iowabarbidoll- You do that, and come back when you can! TantzAerine- Yeah, actually, you're right. You'll be seeing a very angry Nadya around the beginning of chapter two. :-) KamiDaHobo- You're too kind. Thanks for the fave!
D0m at 10:31AM, Aug. 6, 2007
Hyptosis- I never really thought about what Charna would -feel- like... thanks for bringing that up! Nepath- Thanks, Nepath! HarryQ- Expect Nadya to have a lot of those subtle expressions in the future. My goal is to say what I want to through action only. Jmt- I'm glad you liked it! It seems to be the highlight of the page! Themidge- Thanks a lot for the crit- I'm going to work on that ( I actually had a lot of trouble with that perspective...)
D0m at 10:29AM, Aug. 6, 2007
JustNoPoint- Charna is a bit too similar to Nadya in personality, I suppose! EmilyTheStrange- Glad you like how she came out! Rapidoblue- Thanks a lot! Floodgatemartyr- Welcome, and thanks much! Maybonics- Hopefully, their relationship will be realistic in the future, no matter how rude. :-3 Dangerfunk- I topped page 13? Yes!! I heart artists- I'm glad you think so, Tera!
freefall_drift at 8:06AM, Aug. 6, 2007
Nice page. I just noticed there are 3 moons. My only concern is Nadya's face looks stretched in panel 6. Nice atmospherics, you captured a skyscape in the moons light very well.
junoblairb at 8:53PM, Aug. 5, 2007
Last panel is so for the win. I love it when people can draw disgruntled that well. It takes talent! Beautiful mood. I can tell you work very hard on your pages and your story. :D It's all incredible.
Brock at 8:18PM, Aug. 5, 2007
Love Nadya's expression in the last panel. Beautiful colors too. My only gripe is that sometimes Nadya looks different from panel to panel. I'm not sure her profile matches up with her face.
artdude2002 at 6:40PM, Aug. 5, 2007
Wow. This is great. Looks Like Nadya has quite an adventure ahead of her. I'll be following the story, you can count on it.
Bekefel at 5:43PM, Aug. 5, 2007
Your latest plot leak to me has intruiged me. ^_^
Bekefel at 5:43PM, Aug. 5, 2007
Your latest plot leak to me has intruiged me. ^_^
FAL at 7:11AM, Aug. 5, 2007
I like, I like! I think this page looks so much better than the last. The background now blends perfectly with the characters. Superb!
silentkitty at 6:09AM, Aug. 5, 2007
Woo, I'm late~ Anyway, like I already said, this page looks great (although it looks like it got a little stretched out vertically from the last time you showed it to me, did it, or am I dreaming?). Her expression in the bottom panel is priceless, like "how dare you tell me to hush you creepy old lady", hehe. ;)
KamiDaHobo at 1:59AM, Aug. 5, 2007
An absolutely stunning page you have here. Tons of emotion, and none of it seems unnatural. I'd be pissed if I were interrupted, too. Keep up the great work, you've been faved!
Tantz_Aerine at 10:50PM, Aug. 4, 2007
The last panel, [i]again[/i] is wonderful! She looks almost hurt that she was told to hush. Hurt and petulant. ;) And confused! I guess the anger will kick in later. ;)
iowabarbidoll at 7:52PM, Aug. 4, 2007
I like this! Love the painterly style that you work in. And the color story is very nice. I gotta go read the archive! ~B
Vindibudd at 6:36PM, Aug. 4, 2007
Well, she looks a little put out with her lack of awesomeness. She also looks like my exgirlfriend did whenever someone wasn't buying her load of ****.
MrRiot at 6:27PM, Aug. 4, 2007
Largest nation in SHUT THE HELL UP! I like shadow lady already. Another KILLER page. Love your work!
blntmaker at 5:20PM, Aug. 4, 2007
I liken everything you've done to slow cooking sirloin! Great flavor and savoring each moment and each page! I really dig your comic, man...The expression on Jennifer Connolly's face at the end there (oh wait...) NADYA'S face was just classic! Congrats and the large following here! Well earned and well deserved, D0m!