Chapter One- Page 20
D0m on Aug. 31, 2007
Whine, whine, whine. :-) I think this page came out better than the last one, but not better than the average Nadya page. I'm still working out kinks and such. And, sorry about the week-long delay. I may switch update days to Monday.
Please give me your thoughts on this page. And vote! Vote so Nadya can elbow her way back into the top 100 again!!!
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Vote for Nadya at TWC and see the rest of this painting of a friend I made (it's her as a Harry Potter student): 
and for Buzzcomics, you'll see my very first attempt at digitally painting a portrait. It was meant to be Luna Lovegood from the Harry Potter series.:
Thanks for everyone who checks up and comments on Nadya regularly. You keep me doing what I love.
D0m at 11:57AM, Sept. 1, 2007
Dueast- I actually never thought of it as an elevator... hehe, good eye! Skyangel- Tricked? ;-) Anyway, I'm glad you like it, and that you're sticking around! Emily- Yeah, I didn't obey my own rules about proportions... Ah, well. :-) Luigi- Thanks, and welcome back! Loud_G- Thanks!
jissai at 10:36AM, Sept. 1, 2007
U said it Grl!
Bekefel at 10:31AM, Sept. 1, 2007
I thought you love me, you say you love me, life's just a shadow that you cast...
popenfresh at 9:28AM, Sept. 1, 2007
She does indeed have some explaining to do, however, I fear it is neither the time nor the place to do so.
Loud_G at 8:55AM, Sept. 1, 2007
Beautiful, man, just beautiful. The tension is building. I really want to see what happens next. :)
MetalLuigi at 8:36AM, Sept. 1, 2007
I haven't had the chance to comment your comic in a loong while. It still looks as great as ever. :) Nadya does look a bit squished, but as always the artwork is still amazing.
EmilyTheStrange at 8:14AM, Sept. 1, 2007
humm... is it just me, or does the page seem a little "squished" :/
skyangel at 8:05AM, Sept. 1, 2007
PS I've just been tricked into looking at Luna!! lol but it was well woth it, you have amazing talent on the computer!!
skyangel at 8:02AM, Sept. 1, 2007
Woah! shes getting stroppy!! but it could be fear making her like that. Even I feel tense reading these pages! and the luminous quality of the room is excellent, like neon lighting! I'm glad to see this strip is still one of the most read.
dueeast at 7:23AM, Sept. 1, 2007
I like this one! Nadya asks very relevant questions as shadow spider granny attempts to punt! I like how the first two frames make them look like they're somehow mirror images surrounded by mirrors. Either that, or that is the single coolest elevator in the underworld-!
D0m at 6:46AM, Sept. 1, 2007
You're totally right. That was one of my fears, actually. It took me a lot of time to figure out how to make this page, and part of the reason I didn't make a transition was because I didn't really know how I'd pull it off, ya know? =P Thanks for the crit.
TheMidge28 at 6:40AM, Sept. 1, 2007
something is missing from the last page to this page. I clicked back again to review and what happened is that there is too much of a jump from what is going on in this page(which I have no idea with the floating electric sheets?) from what was happening on the last page. A sequence maybe needed showing what the shadow guard is doing, cause and effect, to give the reader maybe a little more context.... I like the mysterious storyline but you also can't keep it completely vague as well and confusing for the reader...don't get me wrong...the art is top-notch and beautiful! but there is a gap from this page and the last...what do you think?
D0m at 4:32AM, Sept. 1, 2007
DAJB- Welcome! Haven't had that comparison yet. :-)
DAJB at 12:42AM, Sept. 1, 2007
Nice work. Reminds me of Willy Wonka's glass elevator. But with added coolness!