Chapter One Page 23
D0m on Oct. 6, 2007
I'm keeping up on schedule. Cool, huh?
Those are the henchmen you see. I'd like to see what you guys think is going to happen in the next page, and what you think is happening to Charna in the last panel.
I -will- say that the next page will be quite explosive! Thanks for all the support, guys.
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Thanks for everyone who checks up and comments on Nadya regularly. You keep me doing what I love.
katyas at 7:38AM, May 11, 2008
Ut-oh ... dun dun DUUUUUUN ...
simonitro at 12:05PM, Oct. 14, 2007
To... to... what?
slimredninja at 12:20AM, Oct. 13, 2007
Amazing page top notch stuff
gsp at 5:59AM, Oct. 12, 2007
Cool DOm, I hope there's a fight.... please.
dgriff13 at 8:38PM, Oct. 10, 2007
Nice work. Love the purple shadow... creepy.
PIT_FACE at 7:08PM, Oct. 9, 2007
cool shadow man, remeinds me of somethin from voivod!
SilverWordz at 6:58AM, Oct. 9, 2007
She's bailing out before Nadya gets the important message! That's what she'd doing! :P Seriously I don't know, I kinda agree with the sunlight hitting her theory, and she's melting, MELTING I SAY! Ahem, sorry. :)
freefall_drift at 6:24AM, Oct. 9, 2007
Cool. the henchmen have arrived. Charna transforming from Shadow to magenta tinged Solid. Wonder what's up?
silentkitty at 8:10AM, Oct. 8, 2007
Looks good Dom, I really like the first two panels. ^^ I'm looking forward to seeing what the bad guys are going to end up doing. My only concern is the "zoom-in blur" thing you've got going on again in the bottom two panels. =P Remember, if you're going to do that, draw the big one first and shrink it down for the smaller panel so you don't get that blur around the edges.
mlai at 7:50AM, Oct. 8, 2007
Sense of depth is better in this page, but still not on par with earlier pages. I guess doing a story comic is pushing your art to new boundaries? The 2 bad guys just "appeared." Kinda surreal. You don't have to have word balloon tails touch the mouth.
man in black at 5:20PM, Oct. 7, 2007
yes very cool
Bekefel at 3:47PM, Oct. 7, 2007
lol nadya.
harryq at 1:20PM, Oct. 7, 2007
I'll be fine with whatever happens! If I start to get too involved, I have to go away.
FAL at 9:20AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Cool page! I really don't know what'll happen, seems like some kind of metamorphosis... Damn you! give me the next one! :)
dueeast at 9:08AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Good stuff! Moving into some new territory with new characters and interactions, I see. Very nice! And thanks for the fan art. It looks good (I like the expression) and I can't wait to see it in color! :)
jmt at 8:16AM, Oct. 7, 2007
I love the last tow frames, really like the last one.
TheMidge28 at 8:05AM, Oct. 7, 2007
I assume the sunlight is hitting Charna in the last frame...and I have no clue as to wat is in store...will need to tune in to find out.
Elleestmort at 7:39AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Aargh! DD doen't mail me when my favs update.
D0m at 5:38AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Tantz- Great you noticed Charna's honesty! And you're the closest with your predictions, by the way... DAJB- All in due time! JNP- I forgot all about good 'ol Carnage! Polo- She's trying! =P
D0m at 5:21AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Talekyn- I think you're very right, sir! Thanks for coming back. BLNT- Well, what Charna was gonna was was to...to, uh...;-) Peipei- Thanks!
polo at 5:19AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Finish the sentence damn you!
JustNoPoint at 3:29AM, Oct. 7, 2007
The last panel has a "Carnage" look to it. I like!
DAJB at 2:28AM, Oct. 7, 2007
What a time to develop a stutter! Oh well ... looks like it's time to go eviscerate a couple of eavesdroppers, anyway!!
Tantz_Aerine at 1:58AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Charna just noticed them, didn't she? And I don't think she likes the prospect at all. I do hope we get to see her in battle mode. She'd put Shelob to shame ;) I really like that she puts herself in the same group with everyone trying to influence Nadya, because that is not only the truth, but also implies that not all influences are negative or bad, which is also true. Well done with that! On another note, I hope Charna's attention is not drawn to the henchmen by some sort of magic/spell they have cast against her and which is beginning to take effect...
Peipei at 1:43AM, Oct. 7, 2007
this is beautiful