Chapter Two- Page 02
D0m on Nov. 3, 2007
If the last three pages were spot-on, this page just isn't. I'm not gonna lie and say I'm proud of this page, because I'm just not. It's a talkypage, so there's not much going on. I'm not too sure if it was a good idea to have the commentary in those captions, but we'll see how it all works out… Ah, well. We all have bad days. :-)
If you can model for Nadya in any way, please PQ me! I need to nail some of the crazy poses I have planned!
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Vote for Nadya at TWC and see a rough sketch of the next page: 
Vote for Nadya at Buzzcomix and also see a rough sketch of the next page:
SwinS at 7:41PM, July 17, 2008
The weird lady kind of looks like the chick from X-files.
katyas at 7:54AM, May 11, 2008
I imagine Nadya is being all tough and "I'm all regal so I won't react" - means no blood-wiping, etc.
Hyptosis at 3:24PM, Nov. 10, 2007
Very cool! =]
LanceDanger at 10:32AM, Nov. 8, 2007
Looking great! =D
slimredninja at 1:47PM, Nov. 7, 2007
Awesome page
hcnoel at 1:31PM, Nov. 6, 2007
Awesome.
dangerfunk at 7:30PM, Nov. 5, 2007
I think she should go with them. They look like good folks.
ShinGen at 5:03AM, Nov. 5, 2007
You are truly talented. Awesome work.
JustNoPoint at 3:28AM, Nov. 5, 2007
That lady still looks like Scully from the X-files to me =P Oooh, I thought you was gonna make a page where Nadya is reacting to the death of Charna in front of her eyes.=( Still looking good IMO Can't wait to see what this is about!
TheMidge28 at 8:06PM, Nov. 4, 2007
the artowrk is always beautiful...I am not too crazy about the greytones...your art is so painterly and it needs to be alive with color. the only thing really hurting this page is the layout. Consider cropping differently and moving the images around. Talking doesn't have to be boring. If you had the colors maybe that would have compensated...but with the greytones push the layout more.
Vindibudd at 3:50PM, Nov. 4, 2007
I don't ever know how to answer that either.
Loud_G at 3:29PM, Nov. 4, 2007
Beautiful! Why do I get the feeling that Nadya is about to SNAP. :D Look out, its going to be a bloodbath!
blntmaker at 3:27PM, Nov. 4, 2007
Don't be so hard on yourself, D0m. You have developed a formula in the way you tell a story...I think this is a natural progression that story. Great art as always too!
polo at 1:35PM, Nov. 4, 2007
Love this page friend! The woman in the last panel i swear looks like the X-files chick! Nice work!
D0m at 11:55AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Thanks, you guys! Fitz- Yeah, I actually use Gillian Anderson as a model! Hehe... VegaX- I never thought about that until now! Freefall Drift- Clinton? Eek! Hehe, I'll think about that contrast thing next time. Tantz Aerine- Yep! Makes you wonder about where Charna is! ;-) JMT- She technically is! Worstcase- Thanks, I like her expression too!
worstcase at 11:34AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Love this page, she looks so determined.
jmt at 11:08AM, Nov. 4, 2007
i think she looks like skully too.
Tantz_Aerine at 10:46AM, Nov. 4, 2007
I love the way we still feel Charna is narrating. Your fonts are also a character in this comic.
freefall_drift at 10:23AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Not a bad page. The contrast on the last panel could be better. If you squint, you loose her face into the background. It's too bad the dark trees were not behind her to make stand out. And she looks a bit like Hillary Clinton. I like how each person has a different font for their speech bubble.
VegaX at 8:37AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Looks good! it's a bit odd tough that she doesn't wipe the blood away.
Fitz at 8:21AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Hm looks like afterlife sucks - you have to work, you have jobs and all ;) As for the artistic aspect of this page, don't worry. It looks good! The black & white style serves its purpose well and you've established a nice mood here. The red haired woman looks gorgeous - kind of reminds me of Gillian Anderson, btw. And we all have our better and worse days... Mine wasn't very productive, even though I've been sitting here all day writing. And I do know your pain, I feel like it's going to be HARD for me to make something better than page 10 of A Bit Cheesy.
popenfresh at 8:14AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Keep those great updates comming.
jgib99 at 7:49AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Lovely grayscale work.
harryq at 7:27AM, Nov. 4, 2007
Fabulous!