Chapter Two Page 02
D0m on Nov. 11, 2007
NEW UPDATE FIRST THING MONDAY MORNING
So, I'm a day off schedule and here's another page I'm not all too proud of. :-) Either way, it'll get better soon, I promise. If you're curious, Eisner's lapsing into Portuguese in that one word. Feel free to wonder why. :-)
NADYA'S UP TO 200 FAVORITES!!! THANKS TO ALL OF YOU!
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Vote for Nadya at TWC and see a sketch of Charna's gorgeous youngest sister by 20 years, Sasha: 
Vote for Nadya at Buzzcomix and also see a sketch of Charna's pretty younger sister by 16 years, Lana:
Give me enough comments about these two and you could be seeing them sometime- I haven't made up my mind. :-P
katyas at 7:58AM, May 11, 2008
That guy is just a psychopath, isn't he?
trevoramueller at 7:40PM, Nov. 15, 2007
Love the scene. Panel 3 is particularly powerful and emotional.
Johnnyrocker at 12:27AM, Nov. 15, 2007
awesome comic
Rutger at 2:18PM, Nov. 14, 2007
Lovin what I've seen so far! Can't wait to see more!
ohnn at 5:29PM, Nov. 13, 2007
Well, he frick'n deserve that. Btw, thanks for the advice. I'm still tlearning Photoshop, so it'll take me a while to get a hang of it. ^^
worstcase at 5:02PM, Nov. 13, 2007
favs rock. you are so going to be featured!
hcnoel at 10:55AM, Nov. 13, 2007
I'm loving the atmosphere in this scene. And you totally have to bite people who put their hands over your mouth. Kelly Rippa almost did that to Clay Aiken. True story!
marine at 9:02PM, Nov. 12, 2007
I love your artwork. I really do.
freefall_drift at 2:08PM, Nov. 12, 2007
Hummmm. Given the appearance of Sasha and Lana in their 20s, that make Charna in her 40s. She need to use moisturizer, cause she is not holding her looks. I though she was 80, from her appearance on page 7.
Fitz at 12:09PM, Nov. 12, 2007
She's alive! She's ALIVE! Of course I knew that, but it's still a relief :) And that's actually a very good page. It's kind of difficult to tell at first where the first panel ends and the second begins, but otherwise, a great job, especially on the last one. And I don't really know Portugese, but I'm guessing boceta is not a nice thing to say?
LanceDanger at 10:25AM, Nov. 12, 2007
That was quick thinking =3 This page looks great, though =3
Dockworker at 10:20AM, Nov. 12, 2007
you have a cool style idea going here; only using color when you really want to emphasis things. Reminds me of "Shindler's List"... y'know, without all the Nazis.
Talekyn at 9:05AM, Nov. 12, 2007
Good page. I think it flows well from panel to panel. Charna's not dead ... wow. And Nadya is defending herself as well as possible! Very good.
dueeast at 8:56AM, Nov. 12, 2007
You surprise me again, D0m! I like this page a lot. The concept of Charna and Nadya teaming up to wreak havoc on the bad guys is a very appealing one! I do agree with TitanOne. I use pictures to get outlines but when it comes to finalizing expressions, clothes and action, it has to be the imagination IMHO. You can do it, believe in yourself! :) `Grats on 200 faves.
Inidas at 7:50AM, Nov. 12, 2007
New fan! Love the artwork.
freefall_drift at 6:14AM, Nov. 12, 2007
So Charna is NOT dead, from a splattery wound to the head. Tough old biddy isn't she? There is something weird with the way you drew his thumb. in the last panel. it's too squared off. great expression through. I looked up what he swore in Babel Fish Translation, but nothing came up. Did a google search. Ohhhh. not a nice word. I can only assume he's from Portugal and he's a dimension jumper.
Tantz_Aerine at 5:58AM, Nov. 12, 2007
I always wonder why when they do bite, they don't bite down all the way to [i]ensure[/i] the damage will keep for at least the current day. XD I like this page. It's powerful. It is also interesting in how your characters interact in terms of one grappling the other. Every artist has a different way of doing that, in my opinion. Well done!
Mutation at 5:17AM, Nov. 12, 2007
I hope you do get featured, you would diserve it. n.n
TheMidge28 at 4:55AM, Nov. 12, 2007
intense scene! the expression on the guys face in the last panel is great...but the hand seems out of proportion with him. Did she bite a finger off or just bite him? it couldn't be a finger he still has four...unless...dude these guys are mutants! ARGH!!!!
harryq at 4:06AM, Nov. 12, 2007
Feisty, isn't she?
D0m at 4:01AM, Nov. 12, 2007
BLNT- Thanks a lot, man. Getting a feature would be like a dream come true! Haha... Yeah, when Charna gets up, things're gonna go bad! DAJB- Very true, especially if you don't know how to fight hand to hand. Wyrvyn- Oh. Thank you, anyway! Loud_G- Her precious happens to be a warm bed and a kingdom to rule over! TitanOne- I'm so scared of trying things completely from my imagination sometimes, hehe... Though page 13's scenery was completely done from my head..
TitanOne at 3:07AM, Nov. 12, 2007
Don't know why you're not proud of the art; I think it's very good. My only piece of constructive criticism--and please don't take this negatively--is that it looks to my itinerant but trained eye like you have started using models/photo reference in recent pages. IMO, comic artists should never use photo reference unless they are depicting something that's (a) manmade and (b) metallic. Be true to your inner art style and draw from the imagination. :)
Loud_G at 2:44AM, Nov. 12, 2007
Ha! She pulled a Gollum on him. off with the finger! Off I say!
Wyrvvn at 2:11AM, Nov. 12, 2007
This comic is just one streak of brilliance after another. I wouldn't be all that pleased with this page either if it were me. :\
DAJB at 12:11AM, Nov. 12, 2007
Heh heh - biting is such an under-rated martial art ...!