Don't mess with Charna! I think the first panel came out best. I was going to tear the fourth panel apart and redo it, but I decided it was too much fuss. I've been working on Off Hours way too much. Thanks for reading, you guys!
W1nk- Actually, yeah... if I get people to model for me like I want, you'll be seeing a style that reflects something that's closer to Alex Ross. :-)
HPkomic- I see what you mean... it wasn't something I thought about until later... Aw, well! :-P
This all came together very well, D0m! Charna isn't all talk and shadow that's for true! I almost feel as if "Gillian" is going to get it worse than the other guy just did...
Great OFF HOURS stuff there! Way to set the tone, man!
Glad you guys are liking it so far!
Tantz- Noo! Nadya's never even heard of Gocci! :-P
Fitz- I'm starting to see Charna as kind of a whimsical Trinity now.. that'll help for character development in the future, methinks.
Hm for some reason this sequence made me think of Trinity (from The Matrix). The last panel looks good, you can see the helplessness and fear on her face, especially in the lips.
katyas at 4:02PM, May 12, 2008
Good page - nice action shots
albone at 6:23PM, Dec. 5, 2007
Nice page, cool font for the inner monologue. Glad you kept the 4th panel as is, sometimes it's best not to overthink it.
Black Daisy at 9:37AM, Dec. 5, 2007
Faved.
D0m at 5:04AM, Dec. 5, 2007
W1nk- Actually, yeah... if I get people to model for me like I want, you'll be seeing a style that reflects something that's closer to Alex Ross. :-) HPkomic- I see what you mean... it wasn't something I thought about until later... Aw, well! :-P
hpkomic at 11:51PM, Dec. 4, 2007
A solid page, but I wonder if the second panel couldn't be improved by not cutting off the assassin's foot?
w1nk at 5:40PM, Dec. 4, 2007
Your new avatar is awesome. Does it forecast another style shift?
Loud_G at 3:55PM, Dec. 4, 2007
I love the action here. Even though it is just shadow action, it comes out really well. Very very cool!
Memmy at 2:15PM, Dec. 4, 2007
Hehe, her eyes is awesome.
Short_Circuiting at 12:00PM, Dec. 4, 2007
i like the way her eyes are glowing at the bottom!
Short_Circuiting at 12:00PM, Dec. 4, 2007
i like the way her eyes are glowing at the bottom!
Mutation at 10:14AM, Dec. 4, 2007
Your faces are so cool the always make me happy to look at them. n.n
JustNoPoint at 6:29AM, Dec. 4, 2007
HAHA, I loved the last panel. She's all like, "I can snipe you, but that's about it!"
kyupol at 5:01PM, Dec. 3, 2007
those shadow figures rock
SwinS at 3:16PM, Dec. 3, 2007
The new character has neat eyes. Excellent job on the profile in the bottom right, as well.
jissai at 2:40PM, Dec. 3, 2007
YESS-NESS! wow, sweet poses!
worstcase at 1:56PM, Dec. 3, 2007
great page, as usual. She looks a little concerned, as i would be.
blntmaker at 10:54AM, Dec. 3, 2007
This all came together very well, D0m! Charna isn't all talk and shadow that's for true! I almost feel as if "Gillian" is going to get it worse than the other guy just did... Great OFF HOURS stuff there! Way to set the tone, man!
man in black at 9:18AM, Dec. 3, 2007
love the comic
LanceDanger at 8:19AM, Dec. 3, 2007
Awesomeness, and I agree with dueeast, I like the 4th panel, too =)
D0m at 4:20AM, Dec. 3, 2007
Glad you guys are liking it so far! Tantz- Noo! Nadya's never even heard of Gocci! :-P Fitz- I'm starting to see Charna as kind of a whimsical Trinity now.. that'll help for character development in the future, methinks.
ohnn at 4:18AM, Dec. 3, 2007
To be quite honest, he deosnt look like he's given up. He looks more indifferent to me. xD
Rutger at 2:46AM, Dec. 3, 2007
Awesome page!
Fitz at 12:50AM, Dec. 3, 2007
Hm for some reason this sequence made me think of Trinity (from The Matrix). The last panel looks good, you can see the helplessness and fear on her face, especially in the lips.
Tantz_Aerine at 12:09AM, Dec. 3, 2007
I love all panels in this one. I think you did a remarkable job in it! I also can't help picturing Nadya wounded, but in a Gocci shirt. XD
DAJB at 11:28PM, Dec. 2, 2007
Smart indeed! And nice to see Charna doing what she's been threatening to do ever since she first appeared! Go, shadow lady/spider/thingy!