Chapter Two Page 10
D0m on Jan. 13, 2008
I'd like to wish everyone a happy new year! This page breaks the hiatus. Over the last two weeks, I had some bright minds helping me flesh out this story. (Big thanks to Boris, Gary and Susan) I pretty much know everything about Nadya and Charna's past now, but I still need to work out the futures of them all. Thoughts on this page, please? I changed the font to make it easier to read and added more contrast than previous pages. Charna's -finally- getting to the meat of the plot and they're saying more than two words a panel…
This year's coming off to a good start. I just turned twenty yesterday, I got an R4DS (look it up!), I tore myself away from an oppressive religion and I'm still crazy about a gorgeous girl in Colorado.
See Nadya and Charna in the new comic “Off Hours”!
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jissai at 11:29PM, Jan. 13, 2008
awesome second panel!
blntmaker at 10:46PM, Jan. 13, 2008
This page has everything... You revealed much more in a the plot on this one page than usually do - With the consultants you added, I'm sure taking this road must be exciting! Speaking of reveal, there is a slight reveal there of Charna's face. The art almost reminds me of Frank Miller. The new font is great too! Your pages are always worth the wait! Congrats on turning 20 (Wow, lots of young'ins around the DD) - and finding love in Colorado! Happy New Year to you as well!