Chapter Two Page 11
D0m on Jan. 21, 2008
I think this page came out better than the last one, actually. No beating around the bush this time- the guy she's talking about is on page 9, guys. Thanks for reading- please vote and comments. The good stuff is coming around the corner.
See Nadya and Charna in the new comic “Off Hours”!
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katyas at 1:06PM, May 13, 2008
Wow, look at that thousand-yard stare. And "enemy approaching, bring out the parkas!" Wait, no ... that's not right ... ?? Hmm ..
Nepath at 5:47AM, March 11, 2008
i know i've commented already, but im catching up on this comic and having a re-read of this latest chapter!
Frozen Oasis at 5:19AM, Feb. 6, 2008
Darn, I'm all out of 'next' buttons.. Can't wait until the next update, this comic is very good!
Fitz at 1:42AM, Jan. 29, 2008
Ooh looks like the princess was shushed GOOD! The page really looks nice, you've done an exceptionally good job on Nadya's face especially.
lastcall at 6:35AM, Jan. 27, 2008
Cool stuff, D0m! What program do you use? Painter? Photoshop? Inquiring minds want to know. :)
FAL at 7:23AM, Jan. 24, 2008
Cool!
Zorafish at 6:39PM, Jan. 23, 2008
She looks so pretty in the second panel.
pinkertonpark at 1:27PM, Jan. 23, 2008
Nice Stuff!!! Wow.
Tantz_Aerine at 8:31AM, Jan. 23, 2008
So much for the element of surprise for [i]that[/i] guy ;)
patrickdevine at 4:57PM, Jan. 22, 2008
I guess Charna doesn't like snow.
jissai at 3:17PM, Jan. 22, 2008
mabe that woke her up from her little 'princess' mode. only time will tell ^^ ( *hint hint* domo, get to work!) oh, and thanks for the comment, u really think my arts improving? yAy!
artdude2002 at 2:06PM, Jan. 22, 2008
Sudden and severe changes in the weather. The Northlands must be a lot like Indiana.
MetalLuigi at 1:33PM, Jan. 22, 2008
I like that even though Charna looks like just a shadow the fallen snow still sits on her shoulders. Nice little detail, and awesome page :)
Adam Black at 8:56AM, Jan. 22, 2008
This is so much fun to read. I love it. :)
kyupol at 8:48AM, Jan. 22, 2008
last panel is nice
dueeast at 6:54AM, Jan. 22, 2008
I like the subtle changes to Nadya's expression on this page, like she's [i]starting[/i] to get that she is not so high-and-mighty in this place. I really like how you drew her in frame 2. All the backgrounds are stunning btw! I agree with the others, though, that Charna was still civil to Nadya. No smackdown today...which is good, since Charna has the sniffles. ;)
TheMidge28 at 6:38AM, Jan. 22, 2008
page 8 you mean. the angry face in the sky, right? liking th enew pages. the new font really makes much more easier to read and would definitely encourage you to update the previous pages with the same font to make the book cohesive for new readers.
PIT_FACE at 6:37AM, Jan. 22, 2008
lve the scenery in the last panel. great work on the snow.
Loud_G at 6:34AM, Jan. 22, 2008
Good work D0m! Charna puts her in her place but she's not evil about it, just gruff. :)
JustNoPoint at 6:02AM, Jan. 22, 2008
I love it when the presence of a villain has effects on an entire environment ^_^
D0m at 4:29AM, Jan. 22, 2008
BLNT- Yeah, Charna's still got some human qualities in her, ya know! Nadya's going to have to transform her own destiny, etc... Taradage- You're right! DAJN- I'd hate a enemy that brought about a desert! Thanks a lot... Nepath- Thanks! Short Circuiting- You love snow too? :3 Ohm- Indeed, but Charna is one tough woman- everyone would do well not to underestimate her.
ohnn at 4:17AM, Jan. 22, 2008
doesn't bode well...
Short_Circuiting at 2:08AM, Jan. 22, 2008
if only it would snow that easily here.
Nepath at 1:15AM, Jan. 22, 2008
Excellent page!
DAJB at 12:03AM, Jan. 22, 2008
Brrr! Hate the cold! Why do bad guys never bring a nice warm, temperate climate? I'm sure they'd get more followers if they did! Gorgeous page as always. Love those last two panels especially.