Chapter Two Page 16
D0m on March 9, 2008
Change of plans. Dom was too tired this week, but expect an update around Friday. Sorry guys.
This page came out fantastic. Even better than the last one, maybe. It's pretty, I stayed consistent, and you all get to learn a bit more about Charna. She's nocturnal, and Nikolai is a jumper. And she can eat a deer by herself. Tune in next week, and thanks for reading!
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katyas at 7:33PM, May 13, 2008
You know, I think it had something to do with the exposition; her talking to the dead deer. It seems a bit odd on the outside, but I got to thinking about it. My hubby and I work really different schedules and as a result I'm often here alone - just me and the critters, I should say, so I'm always wandering around here talking to "myself" (read, to the critters) about whatever I'm thinking of at the moment. So, really, it makes sense. From a certain point of view. From a certain point of view Darth Vader DID kill Luke's father ... from a certain point of view ... *ahem* I'm just ... going to go ... now ...
katyas at 7:31PM, May 13, 2008
I had something really profound that I was going say ... but I done went and fergotten it. Stupid brain. It's like: This is your brain ---> O @!!?
trevoramueller at 7:05AM, April 11, 2008
Your colors are absolutely beautiful, and I love the transition from day to night.
slimredninja at 8:28AM, March 23, 2008
Really a great page visually superb.
bobby_the_kid at 3:21PM, March 21, 2008
oh wow.>->
Wyrvvn at 10:52AM, March 18, 2008
that's some nice time transgressions. And the next page preview makes me laugh. So hard.
Vampvirus at 11:52AM, March 17, 2008
wow nice art! just beautiful... JEALOUS!!!
sifueagle at 9:01AM, March 14, 2008
I like the time progression in the middle panels. Nice.
pinkertonpark at 4:34AM, March 14, 2008
This is a really sharp layout. I love the look. It has a soft brush feel to it.
crifmer at 2:04PM, March 13, 2008
I just found this comic. This is fantastic. Faved.
TitanOne at 12:36PM, March 12, 2008
I like the layout a lot!
amanda at 7:18AM, March 11, 2008
*awesome* I think this is your best page yet!
Nepath at 5:53AM, March 11, 2008
BTW, that was meant to say "cool" not "coo". Just in case you thought i was somehow fluent in Pigeon!!
Nepath at 5:52AM, March 11, 2008
Coo. It's quite strange to see a blonde girl sitting so peacefully and talking about eating a deer that is wrapped in web! Love it
worstcase at 6:32PM, March 10, 2008
Oh wow! ITs so very bright! i am filled to the brim with optimism!
JustNoPoint at 6:26PM, March 10, 2008
I am so going to have to steal that middle panel transition method! ^_^ Awesome! And I love how your story is really moving now. Started off pretty slow, but now it's gaining great momentum!
ohnn at 5:35PM, March 10, 2008
wish i was nocturnal. not necessarily spiderlike though. can't stand spiders. but i think i'm starting to like charna. :3
artdude2002 at 4:09PM, March 10, 2008
I'm impressed that you have been able to depict Charna as an attractive woman, but still make her an unnerving character. Very well done!
kyupol at 2:52PM, March 10, 2008
i love the midpanel transition
patrickdevine at 1:35PM, March 10, 2008
The middle three panels are excellent! They show time passing really well. Un-scary Charna takes a bit of getting used to though...
jissai at 11:02AM, March 10, 2008
nice second panel, she really looks insane ^^
Frozen Oasis at 9:55AM, March 10, 2008
Finally
Fitz at 9:45AM, March 10, 2008
Brilliant job on the colors here, especially the yellow hues add something new to this comic. Keep it up, buddy! :)
D0m at 9:12AM, March 10, 2008
Short_Circuiting- Answered you through PQ, but yeah- Charna's shadow form consumes about thrice the amount of calories necessary to sustain human life. Midge- Much thanks! Pit_face- I'm excited to show his face on the next page! Bradleyo- Dude... thanks so much. That means a lot to me. Korosu- Thanks so much!
korosu at 8:17AM, March 10, 2008
I love how you did the time shift in panel 3-5 panels. The coloring job is just beautiful, too!