oK this time I will got up
Grammar (+1)
Good try for like one of your 1st comic (+2)
added outiline (+1)
Now go down
White around and in teh midle of text (-2)
any you need to keep out so much blank space -(0)
and you need to do more pages then just 1 finally you aren't suppose to put your signitare
3 would be your score but I am mostly always nice
Fantasy at 1:18PM, Dec. 24, 2006
P.Frys not really my name its a stage name!
will123 at 12:34AM, Dec. 23, 2006
oK this time I will got up Grammar (+1) Good try for like one of your 1st comic (+2) added outiline (+1) Now go down White around and in teh midle of text (-2) any you need to keep out so much blank space -(0) and you need to do more pages then just 1 finally you aren't suppose to put your signitare 3 would be your score but I am mostly always nice