Wow... I didn't realize how short he was!
Faces and hair are good, though you have the same problem as me of sometimes making the hair too big... Other than that, body: my brothers yell at me all the time for my "anorexic stick people". I've been working on it, but looks like you have the same issue there, too.
Otherwise, the storyline is funny and interesting. Hope to read more!
XXSweetCakesXX at 2:32PM, March 3, 2011
Hinata_fan: Thanks for the tips. Though my style is based off of nime so the bodys arent really porportioned well to begin with.
XXSweetCakesXX at 2:30PM, March 3, 2011
DJLink: thank you
HiNaTa_fan_13 at 7:58AM, March 3, 2011
Wow... I didn't realize how short he was! Faces and hair are good, though you have the same problem as me of sometimes making the hair too big... Other than that, body: my brothers yell at me all the time for my "anorexic stick people". I've been working on it, but looks like you have the same issue there, too. Otherwise, the storyline is funny and interesting. Hope to read more!
DJLink at 5:32PM, March 2, 2011
heheheh like your work cant wait to see more XD!