Chapter 1 pg11 : The devil and the angel
bluebug on Feb. 20, 2007
** Page by Modesty (art, colors, shading), bluebug (script), James Starrunner **
(Modesty)Well, our horned chick from the previous page is measuring and proclaims victory over her marksmanship. Leaving Star and Aelmon to wonder…why is she trying to kill us? Oooo…what a devious response this horned lady has. A feather floats and a new character comes in!!
Ah…someone who has some level of common sense. Hmm…seems to know the horned-chick (I'm so tempted to write horny but I will resist…oh too late!) This angel guy just busts in and starts a-scolding this girl.
Ah that last panel, it seems something has dawned upon the girl. (Angel guy “No duh!”) Casters cast spells right…she is one too. Sooo…she was shooting at friendlies. Oops. Wait…why is she shooting at people? This makes about as much sense as Azamanga Daioh!
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Characters on this page : Aelmon, Starburst, Sylphi
Azaeziel at 2:25PM, Feb. 21, 2007
YAY! Sweet, sweet color! Beautiful!
Rubygem at 10:37AM, Feb. 21, 2007
sweet i love the lighting backround
Modesty at 10:14AM, Feb. 21, 2007
Update! COLOR'D!
Azaeziel at 9:21AM, Feb. 21, 2007
PS: I love her little cross eyed expression in that first panel, wonderful!
Modesty at 7:27AM, Feb. 21, 2007
No...Angelo is not transparent. I forgot to upload the colored version of this. ^^; I'll fix that today.
Azaeziel at 10:35PM, Feb. 20, 2007
Oh, and is he supposed to be semi see throughish? Just wondering...
Azaeziel at 10:33PM, Feb. 20, 2007
Hey, a somewhat Manly looking Man! heheh, just kidding. Cute characters, but I miss the pretty colors of the previous page. It sounds like you're mixing magic and technology now. 'Casters' and 'Shooters'? We'll see how it goes!!