I'm troubled by the lack of backgrounds in this comic. You've got a few trees thrown in here and there, but there was no real establishing shot. That first panel could really use some backgrounds. Also the face looks a bit long and the hair looks too high up in frontal view, yet better in profile.
ooh so thats it the husband is dead?! O.O oh my gosh RUN LADDY RUN! then again I know she's pregnate but don't let the baby die! X.x why am I panicking I have no idea. still wonderfully done on this page! whoooo
yah thats what i want to know...I'm curious, what on earth does he intend to do...blow her away...incinerate her with dragon breath...bite her nose off? (XD my imagination runs away with me)
Zenstrive at 7:07PM, Oct. 22, 2006
ooo...momma lover...
Knuckles at 8:31PM, Oct. 6, 2006
CCS: Thanks for the crits :) Yeah, backgrounds are still quite challenging for me. It's something I've been working on.
ccs1989 at 2:54PM, Oct. 6, 2006
Also don't pay attention to Tater Salad. He tends to like bashing people instead of actually critiqing thoughtfully.
ccs1989 at 2:52PM, Oct. 6, 2006
I'm troubled by the lack of backgrounds in this comic. You've got a few trees thrown in here and there, but there was no real establishing shot. That first panel could really use some backgrounds. Also the face looks a bit long and the hair looks too high up in frontal view, yet better in profile.
Mika_yi at 1:17PM, Oct. 6, 2006
ooh so thats it the husband is dead?! O.O oh my gosh RUN LADDY RUN! then again I know she's pregnate but don't let the baby die! X.x why am I panicking I have no idea. still wonderfully done on this page! whoooo
Knuckles at 7:14AM, Oct. 6, 2006
Ack... I misclicked that.... sorry, Gaia!
gaia at 4:56AM, Oct. 6, 2006
yah thats what i want to know...I'm curious, what on earth does he intend to do...blow her away...incinerate her with dragon breath...bite her nose off? (XD my imagination runs away with me)
Sanctum Angel at 4:28AM, Oct. 6, 2006
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! fIGHT BACK!!!! kILL HIM!!!!
JillyFoo at 10:16PM, Oct. 5, 2006
XD