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spoonybelle on July 29, 2008
Hey guys, just taking a break from getting my ass kicked by the Elemental Archfiends (new FFIV translation for “Four Fiends of the Elements.” Scarmiliogne is my favorite! Also, that song makes me lol uncontrollably and I sing it whenever it's used in-game.) in a row to upload this a bit early. So, chapter 12! I can't really talk about it in too much detail, but I will say some people will like the chapter, some people may hate it. It's pretty long and there is some, uh, “mature” content later on, but it will be handled in a tasteful manner. I am going with a Wednesday/Friday schedule, so come back on Friday for page 12.01!
Speaking of FFIV DS's translation, why do professional English-speaking translators fail at their own language? Commas do not go after conjunctions, goddamn it. I nerd-rage every time I see stuff like “But, the crystals…!” ARGHDSAKDHJSKALHJFKDLHJKADLSA
Nigellashade at 11:39PM, July 30, 2008
I admire how you've created a floating feeling through this picture. Seeing Annie in a form of liquid is very calming, and seeing her eyes closed, as if she's in a dream. This is very nice.. Plus the dress flowed out while she's in mid-air.. seems as if she's falling. (Either it be with emotions, or how her luck with her situation arises) It's up to her on making choices, and how she feels inside. Good update Jen, this is a very nice Cover update. Love the way you've drawn her, in this pose.. Take care, and glad you've updated. ~M~
spoonybelle at 7:46PM, July 30, 2008
Thanks everyone~! chocolate_addict: Yeah, it really pisses me off when I see stupid mistakes in professionally published pieces of work, be it video games, novels, etc. You'd think with the amount of work that goes into these things they'd hire a competent proofreader, but apparently not...
Toshubi at 5:46PM, July 30, 2008
I like the cover.
artdude2002 at 2:12PM, July 30, 2008
Nice.
megoon at 12:42PM, July 30, 2008
i want that dress
Kaede Higuchi at 10:37AM, July 30, 2008
Yay! ^^
TwilightRain 888 at 9:00AM, July 30, 2008
oooo pretty....
eSilva at 1:02AM, July 30, 2008
nice cover!
chocolate_addict at 12:28AM, July 30, 2008
wow! great cover page... can't wait to see what happens in this chapter ;) and I can understand that you get angry when you see 'but, ...' it also drives me crazy