Agree with most of the posts. Fix grammar, but c'mon, you can do better ^^! Try to mess around with some comics over here so you can get an idea. I'll be looking foward to it anyways if some change comes up.
BUT I WILL HELP. GO TO THIS LINK OK. HIGHLIGHT IT, COPY IT, THEN PASTE INTO ADDRESS BAR. THIS LINK HAS A BUNCH OR TIPS ON HOW TO USE MS PAINT REALLY WELL. LIKE IT'LL SAVE THIS COMIC. THAT'S HOW GOOD THIS LINK IS. I'LL START YOU OFF ON THE SPEECH BUBBLES. THEN CLICK NEXT AND STUFF TO SEE WHAT ELSE IT HAS TO OFFER
http://paintpro.smackjeeves.com/comics/54073/
dude no offense this is bad. i think you're bit mixing. the backgrounds....well they're hand made and suck.it doesn't matter whether you like em or not. nobody else does it looks bad and gets bad ratings. you're speech bubbles have no tails or lines around em. grammer is bad. you don't talk like it's AIM this is a website for good grammer. and you either saved as GIF or JPEG which is real bad for sprites.
SO LEARN HOW TO MAKE SPRITES BEFORE YOU POST EM. HERE'S A BIG FAT 1. UNTIL YOU FIX ALL OF THE ABOVE ALL YOU WILL GET FROM ME IS ONES.
Here is how to make textboxes/text first make the text. Then put the textbox OVER the text so that there's no empty space. Also ,spell check and don't use these if you're going to ^_^,OMG,teh etc.
I hope again you take my advice.
Bad Grammer - 1
No Text Bubbles - 1
Saved Document As GIF - 0
Style Mixing - 0 ( since they're from different games... but try to get one style and stick with it )
Fix those things and I may like it...
Ahti_Turtle at 11:10AM, April 18, 2011
Agree with most of the posts. Fix grammar, but c'mon, you can do better ^^! Try to mess around with some comics over here so you can get an idea. I'll be looking foward to it anyways if some change comes up.
puck the duck at 1:04PM, Jan. 21, 2007
wooops i gave you link to 3-d drag. don't mind that. there are next and previous arrows to show you other things.
puck the duck at 1:04PM, Jan. 21, 2007
BUT I WILL HELP. GO TO THIS LINK OK. HIGHLIGHT IT, COPY IT, THEN PASTE INTO ADDRESS BAR. THIS LINK HAS A BUNCH OR TIPS ON HOW TO USE MS PAINT REALLY WELL. LIKE IT'LL SAVE THIS COMIC. THAT'S HOW GOOD THIS LINK IS. I'LL START YOU OFF ON THE SPEECH BUBBLES. THEN CLICK NEXT AND STUFF TO SEE WHAT ELSE IT HAS TO OFFER http://paintpro.smackjeeves.com/comics/54073/
puck the duck at 1:00PM, Jan. 21, 2007
dude no offense this is bad. i think you're bit mixing. the backgrounds....well they're hand made and suck.it doesn't matter whether you like em or not. nobody else does it looks bad and gets bad ratings. you're speech bubbles have no tails or lines around em. grammer is bad. you don't talk like it's AIM this is a website for good grammer. and you either saved as GIF or JPEG which is real bad for sprites. SO LEARN HOW TO MAKE SPRITES BEFORE YOU POST EM. HERE'S A BIG FAT 1. UNTIL YOU FIX ALL OF THE ABOVE ALL YOU WILL GET FROM ME IS ONES.
Iced at 12:45PM, Jan. 21, 2007
Im From Brazil :)
Flame the Hybrid at 12:36PM, Jan. 21, 2007
Oh where are you from? I'm from France.
Iced at 12:28PM, Jan. 21, 2007
The grammar is because im not American :P And The Backgrounds is because i love MS paint backgrounds :)
Rydel6 at 12:22PM, Jan. 21, 2007
You should find real backgrounds and fix your grammar.
Flame the Hybrid at 12:18PM, Jan. 21, 2007
Here is how to make textboxes/text first make the text. Then put the textbox OVER the text so that there's no empty space. Also ,spell check and don't use these if you're going to ^_^,OMG,teh etc. I hope again you take my advice.
Kitty Man at 12:18PM, Jan. 21, 2007
Bad Grammer - 1 No Text Bubbles - 1 Saved Document As GIF - 0 Style Mixing - 0 ( since they're from different games... but try to get one style and stick with it ) Fix those things and I may like it...