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midnightstories on Nov. 12, 2007
The old banging the sword trick works everytime. Thanks for the pickups guys, always needed and thanks for looking
irrevenant at 11:31AM, Nov. 14, 2007
That they find their way by hearing doesn't automatically mean they have sonar like a bat. Humans can find their way towards a sound, and loud noises interfere with our ability to hear softer noises.
DAJB at 6:24AM, Nov. 14, 2007
One thought - you could maybe swap the positions of the third and fourth dialogue balloons. As it stands, the reader tends to read them in the wrong order. Not a big issue; just a thought.
SandroTheMaster at 8:59PM, Nov. 13, 2007
Hmm... well, I may be being a prick here, but this is a very cliché and overused scenario. And for the record, bats don't get dazed with any banging sound, it is needed sounds high pitched enough to make humans disoriented to make the same to a bat. And hearing isn't the only kind of echolocation around, actually, it's the most unusual. Air movement, pressure change sensitivity and ground tremor are way more common and reliable, the air-propagated sound based sonar is only a support for bats to their excellent vision. Still these curiosities are secondary and not really influencing my rating. The real problem is that added to this uninspired strip the narrating felt to degenerate back a pinch. And explaining things in a battle is really obnoxious. I usually don't bother to give ratings to strips that I think deserve less than a 4 to avoid unnecessary bashing and jeopardizing the artist's ratings, but here I really think you could do better. You seem to rely too much on the digital 3-dimensional art and don't give as much attention to the writing itself, even after a noticeable improvement several strips back.
ohnn at 4:07AM, Nov. 13, 2007
Hecks yea!