06-001 Party of Two?

fukujinzuke on Jan. 21, 2010

Wow, it's been a while. Well, here's the beginning of the 10 page chapter going up. The script needed some re-writing after taking into account some of the constructive criticism. One that really stood out was about having too much mindless/illogical fanservice… so I added more. I was also told that my drawings were “plain” and “nothing special”… so I continued to draw the same way. I mean, nothing I can do about that but keep drawing anyway. I was also told I had nothing but scattered “weak jokes” after the first chapter. Aha! So I need to be more offensive! Yes! Let's do this! What? Am I interpreting that incorrectly? Baw, who cares! I mean, really, if readers didn't find any of my stuff funny, they wouldn't come back reading this stuff. That's right, all three of you out there! I love you guys!


I'd like to try for a page a day, but don't be surprised if I have a couple of days gaps here and there. Coloring takes a bit of time.